I swear I will be there every time
When you need me
I will always lay my wings
Through your ways to comfort you
I swear I will defend and fight
Against all evil around you
I will hold you in my arms
When you shiver in fear
I swear I will be strong to protect you
From all kind of threat
I will rear your wishes in my heart
With all my love and life
I swear I will always be at your side
When you walk through pain
I will be there to take over all your pain and
Replace them with all my happiness….
I swear with love in my heart
I will never let you down
I will be there so that you may
Never feel you are alone
I swear I will be your love
And never let you feel sorrow
I will be the sinuous river
With songs for stars and you
I swear I will be in your faith
And man of trust
I will be the fascinating dream in
Your sleep when are tired
I swear I will feel the way you do
And never hurt your feelings
I will always ensure that
You can walk your ways with freedom
I will be your voice when
You intend to say something
I will be your everything
Even if you don’t want
I swear I will always love you
Till my death and thereafter
I will always be your best friend
You rear inside yourself













Comments
anyhow...yeh the poems sweet...girls nowdays just die to get a guy like that hehe
keep up the good work.
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Evil=Bad
Bad=Cool
Therefore...
¯²¬EVIL IS COOL¯²¬
~Evil is just spelt backwards of Live!@#$%
Thats why I couldnt correct it. I submitted it even un-edited.
keep up the good work
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Evil=Bad
Bad=Cool
Therefore...
¯²¬EVIL IS COOL¯²¬
~Evil is just spelt backwards of Live!@#$%
Hows everything going?
everythings ok i guess
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Evil=Bad
Bad=Cool
Therefore...
¯²¬EVIL IS COOL¯²¬
~Evil is just spelt backwards of Live!@#$%
... wait hold on, the last line... "You rear inside yourself?"
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If you're not a native English-speaker, I apologize for being so critical. I just realized that if you weren't, that could be the reason for the word misuse and confusion.
Its okay ........
Actually I am kinda accepting your criticism friendly coz friends are like mirrors........to correctify faults.
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Dont worry, I am fine.
From one emotional poet to another, I hope you have your princess to speak these words to, or will have soon.
Any time you want a real life editor, just let me know and I would be honoured to help.
Inge
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redmatilda
Glad to meet you in DA ! I am really happy to get your offer ! Thanks very much !
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Dont worry, I am fine.
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